大学英语作文范文赏析一

写作能力不是突击几天就可获得的，写出一篇优秀的作文需要一个循序渐进的过程，除了掌握英文写作的一般知识外，大家平时应该多读、多练，不仅要在提高自己的英文语言方面下工夫，而且对一些社会热点问题要多思考以形成自己的见解，在考试时可以从“大脑的信息库”提取“观点”，而不至于无话可说。下面给出一些优秀的作文，作文形式基本上是四级的常见题型，供大家欣赏和借鉴。

范文1 　　 "Good Health"
1．身体健康的重要性。
2．保持健康的途径。
3．我自己的实践。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Good 　　Health
　　The desire for good health is universal. In our competitive society it is important to maintain good health. On the one hand, people with good health can do work with full confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness. On the other hand, a sick person is usually not interested in everything around him and therefore he loses many opportunities to become successful.
　　There are many ways to keep it. First, those who are always on the go from morning till night should find time to relax because too much stress will affect their health. Second, enough time should be left for sleep because that will help one become rested and refreshed. Finally, regular physical exercises benefit one's health a lot. So one should always keep in mind that a certain amount of exercise is not a waste of time.
　　As for me, I like playing tennis in the morning. I also attach much importance to enough sleep and relaxation. I believe this will ensure my good health for the rest of my life.

<评析> 这篇文章语句通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样，用词面比较宽。就内容来说，则很切题，包括了提纲中的所有要点。第一段的第二句即主题句是从提纲发展而来的，第二段的首句，即主题句也是由提纲中的第二点发展而来。