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高考英语答题技巧解题方法-高考作文

[日期:2008-05-05] 来源:  作者:英语坊 [字体: ]

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高考作文评分标准/高考作文评分原则-总则】
   1.
本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
   2.
评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
   3.
词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。
   4.
评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
   5.
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

 6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

【高考作文评分标准-各档次的给分范围和要求】

第五档(很好)(21-25)
1.
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.
覆盖所有内容要点。
3.
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4.
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5.
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6.
完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档()(16-20)
1.
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.
虽漏掉12个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5.
应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
6.
达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档(适当)(11-15)
1.
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2.
虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
5.
应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
6.
整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第二档(较差)(6-10)
1.
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2.
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
3.
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
5.
较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
6.
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。

第一档()(1-5)
1.
未完成试题规定的任务。
2.
明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3.
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
5.
缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
6.
信息未能传达给读者。

不得分:(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息:内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
作文答题技巧、解题方法】

写作短文时,要注意审题,对写什么和怎么写必须有一个清晰的思路。很多考生动笔就写,错了以后再涂改,严重影响卷面整洁,也影响了成绩;其次要在遣词造句上多下功夫。尽可能运用较熟悉的词组、短语或成语;第三要力求变换各种句式,当然,也不能片面追求花哨文字,拼凑错误百出的句子,使成绩大打折扣;行文连贯是阅卷教师比较看重的一个方面。要有好的开头和好的结尾;为了使文章结构严密,增强说服力和感染力,考生应该在句与句之间,恰当地使用一些过渡性词语。
  另外,考生很容易出现句与句之间不使用连接词的错误,这是英语写作中的大忌。
  最后,考生应该把写完的作文阅读两遍,认真检查是否有拼写方面的错误,是否有时态、语态方面的错误,是否存在中式英语等等。
  
作文答题技巧、答题方法】
   
1、仔细审题,弄清大意。审题是写作的关键所在,仔细审题才能深刻理解题目所要表达的主要意思。不论是汉语提示写作还是看图写作,都要仔细审题,弄清写作内容,如背景、人物、时间、体裁等的要求。
   
2、编拟提纲,拟出要点。在弄清了题目所要表达的主要意思后,便可根据主要内容列出提纲,即整理出内容要点。理清要点的目的就是为了把握短文的脉络,不至于遗漏内容的要点。
   
3、紧扣要点,扩写成文。在列出要点后,依据要点扩写成文。扩写时,可运用想象适度发挥。但切记不可随意乱写,要紧扣画面或汉语提示,适当描述,连贯通顺即可,不能把汉语提示全部译成英语。
   
4、反复检查,修正错误。扩写成文后,考生应将扩写后的文章认真读一读,检查是否有错误。在检查时,着重看短文是否扣住了提示或图画的内容,要点是否有遗漏。同时,还要注意有无语法错误,如时态、人称等,是否符合文体特点、格式等等。
    5
、写作,要注意留够时间,一般需要20分钟。最好能打草稿,这样可以减少错误,书写也比较清晰工整。作文注意内容要点要全,语言要通顺。提倡用小词小句来写,适当用复杂结构。

 

 

They flew in the face of common sense. 他们的行为与常理相悖。

She threw cold water on his plans. 她给他的计划泼冷水。

Hes the butt of their jokes. 他是他们的笑柄。

It serves him right. 那是他应得的报应。

He isnt short of talent. 他很有天分。

Shell sleep on it. 她会仔细思考这件事。

Theyre worlds apart. 他们有天壤之别。

She knows this backwards. 她对此知之甚详。

Hes dead to the world. 他不省人事了。

He has an eye for these things. 他对这些东西很有鉴赏力。

There was a change of heart. 有人变心了。

No one should be subjected to that. 没有任何人应该遭受那种事。

He was soon found out. 他马上就被揪出来了。

Shes one brick short of a load. 她脑子少根筋。

He is really packed on the pounds. 他真的肥了一圈。

 

 

 

 

Drinking in the USA (1) --酒在美国

美国的酒大致可分为啤酒、鸡尾酒、威士忌和葡萄酒。啤酒有淡啤酒和
浓啤酒之别;包装采用瓶装、听装和壶装。鸡尾酒和“混合饮料”含有
很浓的酒精成分,饮用方式一般有加冰和不加冰两种,其配制方式各种
各样。威士忌也是一种烈性酒,而且呈油状,分为黑麦威士忌和苏格兰
威士忌。葡萄酒分为红、白两种,但值得注意的是:标有“Chablis”商
标的葡萄酒并非法国所产的无甜味的白葡萄酒,而是美国加利弗尼亚州生
产的白葡萄酒,该酒在美国享有盛誉。
  Beer
  American beer, with very few exceptions, varies from the mediocre(普通的) to the terrible. There are not many types of beer in the US"light" and "dark" are two terms commonly used.
  
It is therefore normal to order beer simply by brand name. In a restaurant, in fact, it is quite all right to order "a beer", and they will tell you what they have.
  It is not necessary, either, to specify quantity when ordering beer. If it comes in bottles or cans, you will get a bottle or can, and if it's "on tap"(可以随时取用的) you will get a glass, unless you order a "pitcher"(有嘴和柄的大酒罐
i.e.a jug). The latter is very convenient thing to do, since you can then take the jug and glasses to your table and keep filling up without going back to the bar. (It is harder, however, to know how much you have drunk.)
  Some beer comes in bottles with tops that look as if they need an opener, but you can, in fact, screw(拧开) them off by hand
though you have to be very careful not to hurt yourself. It is possible, in some stores and bars, to find a wide selection of beer from all over the world, especially Western Europe and Australia, and it is good fun to experiment with these.
  
Cocktails
  Cocktails and "mixed drinks" are much more popular and rather stronger in the USA than in Europe, and visitors may not be familiar with some of the terminology(术语
). "On the rocks", as you probably know, means with ice, while "straight up" or "up" means neat and without ice.
There are hundreds of different cocktails, and there is no space here to list all the different names.
  The Hard Stuff

  In America "whiskey" means bourbon(一种烈性威士忌酒,最初为美国肯塔基州Bourbon地区所产) unless otherwise indicated. Bourbon is a rather oily spirit made from maize(玉米). Rye(黑麦威士忌酒) whiskey is called "rye" and Scotch whiskey "Scotch".
  Wine

  In bars wine can often be bought by the glass. Don't be misled by names such as "Chablis" is used to refer to white wine, and "Burgundy" to redAmericans seem never to have heard of white Burgundy..

Eating in America (2)--美国餐厅用餐知多少

 

中国菜着重色、香、味, 西餐讲究实惠。初到美国餐馆用餐,应该注意如下
事项:
1
)选择合适的餐馆(如:家庭式餐馆、特色餐馆以及自助式餐馆等);
2
)餐馆营业时间(上午1130开门营业,直到夜晚);
3
)一般都应事先预订餐位:
4
)到达餐馆后,不能径直地到餐桌旁入桌,除非餐厅有“随意就坐”的告示;
5
)付款时,别忘了留给服务员一定比例的小费(一般为实际总额的10%
15%
)。
Eating out is one of the joy of being in the USA. The food is usually good and often excellent; the prices are reasonable ; and the service is mostly fine.
      Choosing a Restaurant
选择餐馆
      Some restaurants are open for breakfast; others are open twenty-four hours a day. A number of restaurants call themselves "family restaurants". Many of these serve no alcohol and have fairly restricted menus which include steaks, hamburgers, omelettes(
炒蛋) and sandwiches, and all are at very reasonable prices. They may also serve smaller and cheaper children's portios(份餐). Note that many American restaurants are "speciatly" restaurants . They may serve only, or mainly , steaks , seafood, etc.
      When to Eat
供餐时间

      Many restaurants, especially the more expensive ones, open at about 11
30 a.m.(midday, rather than 1 p.m. , is the most normal time for lunch in the USA), and some remain open until the evening, so it is possible to order a meal throughout the afternoon.
      In many areas it is usual for people to leave work and go out for an evening meal at 5 p.m. or 6 p.m. , than waiting until later.
      Reserving a Table
预订餐位

      Eating out is rather popular in the USA. And it is often necessary to make a reservation. You will sometimes see short queues of people waiting for tables at restaurants-it's more pleasant to wait in the bar , of course, if there is one-but there queues more quickly.
      Arriving at Restaurant
到达餐馆
      When you arrive at most restaurant, you should not just go in and sit down-unless you see a sign saying "Please seat yourself" . Usually you will have to wait for a "hostess" or "captain"(
领班) to escort(陪同) you to a table . Often there will be a sign that reads "Please wait to be seated".
      Do not expect to share a table with other parties, even if the restaurant is crowed . It just isn't done.
      Many restaurant have a no-smoking section, in some place by lows.
      One excellent American custom is that after you have sat down your waiter or waitress will often bring you a glass or water(with ice naturally) and will keep on refilling it throughout the meal. (Most American are incapable of eating a meal without drinking something at the same time.)
When your waiter or waitress takes your order, it is not very normal for one person to order for the whole table. Each person orders separately , except in the most expensive restaurants.
      Summoning a waiter
召唤侍者

      You may find your waiter unusually friendly. He may ask you how you are (You're supposed just to say "Fine"), inquire whether you have a good day and , later on say that he hopes you will enjoy your meal.
      To summon a waiter in a American restaurant you may call "Bill", or "Mary", or "Claude", or whatever. Waiters and waitresses often actually introduce themselves when they first come to your table or wear name tags, you are permitted to use their first names.
      Paying the Bill
付款
      The bill (often called the "check") comes usually with tax added but no service chare-though some restaurant do now add a service charge. The etiquette(
规矩) books say that you should leave a ten per cent tip(小费) for lunch, fifteen per cent for dinner. The tip should be calculated on the basis of the total before the addition of tax.
      At many restaurant you can ask the waiter to bring the bill and than pay at a cash desk on the way out.

 

 

Eating in America (3)--美国主食吃什么

美国人吃午餐和吃晚餐之前通常要喝点鸡尾酒,但在加利福尼亚州,人们
大都喝葡萄酒。吃主食之前,一般都要吃一盘色拉。炸磨茹和炸洋葱圈可
作为开胃食品,牛排、猪排和鸡(腿)为主食,龙虾、贝壳类动物以及各
种鱼类甚至包括淡水鱼被统称为海鲜。炸土豆条是深受人们喜爱而且几乎
成了必不可少的食物。另外应特别注意的一点,如有吃剩的食物,一定要
打包带回家,以免浪费。
  Cocktail鸡尾酒
  It is quite usual to drink cocktails before lunch and dinner in America and somewhat less usual, except in California, to drink wine with a meal. You can either have a cocktail in the bar, if there is one, while you wait for a table or for friends, or you can have one served before your dinner comes. At some restaurants the waiter/waitress will come to your table as soon as you sit down to ask if you want a cocktail, and you can then drink this while deciding what to order to eat. At others, there may be a separate cocktail waiter or waitress. In this case, you do not normally order wine from him or her but from the normal waiter- or the wine waiter is there is one.
  
Do not hesitate to order Californian wines. They can be excellent and in many parts of the country are cheap.
  Salad 色拉

  It is usual to have a salad with your meal, and a separate plate is provided for this purpose. The normal practice in America is to eat the salad before the main course. A wonderful American invention is the salad bar. In restaurants that have these salad bars the waiter does not bring your salad. You go to the salad bar and help yourself, usually to as much as you want. This is normally done after you have ordered your meal; you eat the salad while the main course is being cooked.
  Choosing from the Menu 选菜

  American menus can look rather confusing at first sight, for they may use some terms which are unfamiliar to most vistors. Here are some points which may be useful.
  Fried mushrooms, fried onion rings (洋葱圈) and fried zucchini (小胡瓜) are sometimes served as starters (第一道菜
).
  Potatoes most often come "French-fried" or baked. If you order a baked potato, the waiter will ask you what you want on it. The choice is butter and/or sour cream and sometimes chives (细香葱
).
  
Very often vegetables do not come automatically with the meal, and you have to pay extra for them.
  "Scrod" (小鳕鱼), "red snapper" (啮龟) and "mahi hahi" are all name of fish. "Seafood"means lobster (龙虾), shellfish and fish, including,funnily enough, freshwater fish! Prawns (对虾
) are known as "shrimp".
  
American beef is usually good and often wonderful.
  American salt and pepper (糊椒粉) pots are confusing until you realize that the salt pot may look like a pepper pot except that the salt pot's holes are bigger. Pepper is normally black rather than white. American mustard (芥末
) is mild and normally eaten with hot dogs or hamburgers rather than meat.
  And that stuff in a dish that looks ice cream is actually whipped (搅拌过的
) butter.
  Leftovers 吃剩的食物

  You have probably heard that in American restaurants, if you can't finish your meal, you can put the remains in a "doggy bag" and take them home. This is quite true. If you leave some meat, in particular, your waiter may ask you if you'd like him to put it into "a little bag", or you can ask him to do this.

 

Eating in America (4)--无所不在的快餐店

 

 

随着美国人生活节奏的加快,快餐食品便应运而生.其快餐连锁店遍及世
界各地,其中影响最大的当属麦当劳快餐连锁店.供应的快餐食品有:汉
堡包、烤牛肉、牛排、火腿、三明治、肯德鸡、油炸土豆片、烘馅饼、冰
淇淋以及各种碳酸饮料等.
  Fast Food 快餐食品
  Fast-food chainsAmerican-style are currently on the increase all over the worldMost of these places work on a similar principle There is a long counter above which is displayed a listoften with pictures of the items available and behind which several peopleoften students   working for the minimum wageare serving Individual queues form in front of each assistant You receive what you order more or less immediately and take it on a tray to a table picking up thing like straws(吸管), pepper salt ketchup(蕃茄酱),pickles(泡菜)and napkinsusually paper napkins on the wayIf you cant see any knives and forks this means you are supposed to eat with your handsIf you cant see any straws thats because they are hiding in the straw dispenser(分配器) that you have to fiddle(拨弄) with the bottom of it to get a strawone at a timeto emergeWhen youve finished you yourself throw away everything except the tray
  Many fast-food places have drive-in facilitiesYou place your order from your car via(通过) a microphone and then drive round to a special window to pay and pick it up You may even encounter places where a waitress bring your meal out and you sit and eat it in the car from a tray hooked over the door through the open window
You may be asked if your order is
for hereor to go ”(ieto take away).In some states there is no sales tax on food consumed
  Types of Fast Food Restaurants 快餐店的种类
  The most widespread type of fast-food restaurant is that serving hamburgers such as the chains of McDonaldAll the different chains have their own specialties Arbys restaurants serve large roast beef ham and cheese and turkey(火鸡) “sandwiches”. Some restaurant chains specialize in serving steaks quickly and cheaply And then theres Kentucky Fried Chicken
  Chips 油炸土豆片
  Chips in America are called French friesor fries for short.(Note that in the USA chips mean crisps).“French friesare normally thinner than chipsAmercians generally put ketchup on their chips and you will not normally find vinegar(醋).
   Pizzas(意大利式)烘焰饼
  There are many specialty pizza restaurants in America and many of them take telephone orders and deliver pizzas to your home which can often be convenientThey come in different sizes and a large one can be big enough for a party of four peopleIf you want to share a pizza but cant agree on the ingredients it is possible to order two different sets of toppings one set on each half
  Ice-Cream 冰淇淋
  Shops selling large number of different flavors of ice-cream are very common in America If you are not sure what flavor you want generaly you can sample a small spoonful of a particular flavor to see if you like it You can either have your ice-cream in a plain cone”(普通型锥形物) or in a sugar cone”(甜脆型锥形物).
  Soft Drinks 软饮料
Fast-food restaurants do not serve alcohol
The soft drinks most often sold are Coca-Cola and Pepsi——Cola plus fizzy drinks which are like lemonade and root beerwhich is like cough medicine).Fizzy drinks are known as carbonated beverages”(碳酸饮料) or more colloquially,“soda”,“pop”,“soda pop”,and soft drinks”.
All these drinks come with lots of ice
In fact you will probably find as much ice as drink in your drinkIf you ask for a soft drink without ice they will think you are funny but will be probably obliged.(They may charge you a bit extra for ice is cheaper than Coke.)

 

 



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